Headline writing requires precise and careful wording. Space limiations and time limitations on ther reader require the headlines to be short and easy. Shorter words are generally easier for readers to understand as well. Here is a list of words that can be shortened.
1) allocate: give, allot, issue, award
2) answer: reply
3) arrange: set, plan, shape, slate
4) beginning: start, opening, initial
5) command: lead, rule, direct, reign, sway
6) confess: admit
7) decision: rule, order, writ, decreed
8) inform: tell
9) murder: kill, slay
10) schedule: slate, set, plan, arrange
11) confirm: verify, affirm, approve
12) essentually: actually, in essence, vitally, significantly
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Showing posts with label stylistics. Show all posts
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Tuesday, March 9, 2010
Tuesday, March 2, 2010
Vocabulary Builder Kris Hoyt
Promise: Assure, Swear
Criticize: Assess, appraise
Examine: Look, analyze
celebrate: Cheer, Party
Overcome: Defeat, pass
pursuit: follow, stalk
Silent: Quiet, peaceful
Ridicule: Joke, Laugh
Murder: Butcher, assassinate
question: interrogate, query
Vibrate: Shake, move
Post: Hang, present
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Vocabulary Builder, Terra Poole

Shorter synonyms are really important for ensuring clear and precise headlines. Because headlines are the most important part of getting people to read the story, it is important to appeal to a broad audience. Some people's vocabularies aren't as defined as other people's therefore short and clear words ensure more people will understand what the headlines are referring to.
Chapter 9 Words:
Former: of yore, whilom
Wreck: crash, crate
Silent: hush, mousy
Steal: pirate, cozen
Thwart: balk, crimp
Pledge: toast, promise
Nullify: cancel, revoke
Inform: brief, clue
Convene: rally, unite
Climax: payoff, top
My words:
vigilante: bird dog, warden
plethora: glut, plenty
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Vocabulary Builder, Jayme Hagen

Short language is needed to make small headlines and tidy up really lengthy headlines. An important thing to keep in mind though, just because a word is smaller does not necessarily make it a better choice, if it is a word that most people do not understand, it is better to go with a more common word. The goal is always to have the largest possible audience, not all people want to read with a thesaurus handy...
The Book's Ten:
- allocate: give out, hand out
- answer: retort, rejoin
- choose: want, select
- destroy: wreck, break
- quarrel: fight, battle
- examine: review, check out
- former: prior, old
- inform: notify, advise
- nullify: annul, cancel
- resign: leave, pack in
- thwart: block, beat
- devestated: destroyed, wrecked
- engulf: flood, bury
Monday, March 1, 2010
Vocabulary Builder, Steven Wagers
The use of short words in headlines is very important as it helps to keep the headlines themselves shorter. By using synonyms of words one can make the headline longer or shorter in order to fit their unique needs. That is why it is so important to have a good grasp of the English language.
10 Words from page 181:
1. Allocate- give, allot, issue, award (assign, apportion)
2. Answer- reply (respond, retort)
3. Choose- name, elect, pick (select, prefer)
4. Destroy- raze (level, ravage)
5. Examine- scan, study (search, probe)
6. Former- ex (prior, previous)
7. Inform- tell (notify, advise)
8. Pledge- vow, agree, oath (guarantee, assure/surety)
9. Reveal- tell (unveil, impart, inform)
10. Thwart- foil, stop, limit (prevent, baffle)
My 2 words
1. Shatter- (split, crack, break)
2. Maniacal- (insane, crazy)
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Friday, February 26, 2010
Vocabulary Builder, Pamela Di Pinto
Short words are essential for headline writers when limited by space. Here are ten words from the vocabulary list from pg. 181 of the text, plus two extra short synonyms for each word. At the bottom are two of my own words to add to the list, along with their shorter synonyms:
*Note: My additions are in italics
- Acquire: get, gain, earn
- Answer: reply, retort, rejoin
- Confess: admit, grant, allow
- Decline, Decrease: dip, fall, drop, crash
- Destroy: raze, beat, crush
- Murder: kill, slay, snuff, whack
- Resign: quit, leave, cede
- Reveal: tell, show, blurt
- Steal: rob, loot, take, rob, nab
- Suspend: stop, end, delay, defer
My additions to the list:
- Assault: hit, beat
- Deliver: give, deal
Tuesday, February 23, 2010
Vocabulary Builder, Aden Cruz

Additional Synonyms:
acquire: gain, attain
argument: dispute, quarrel, spat
attempt: effort, challenge
climax: highlight, height, pinnacle
compete: contend, fight, race
confess: declare, profess, affirm
criticize: condemn, carp,
former: past, earlier
inform: notify, report
pursuit: search, tracking
Additional Words:
Tragic: sad, terrible, awful
Explode: burst, blast
Endeavor: try, effort, attempt
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