Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Punctuation Review, Ricki Cundliffe

a. "We don't know how much longer we can wait before beginning it (the Downtown Revitalization plan the mayor said.

b. It was identified as a Canadian plane but US planes were in the area also Maj Gen Larry Jones said.

c. Did the Dawson Creek Peace River Block News win the photography award.

d. Bob Rock was inducted into the Canadian Music Hall of Fame in 2007 he was also nominated for a Juno that year.

e. The inmate said to the parole board "Jones should not be released from prison. He is a dangerous man. He has told me several times, I will kill again if I get a chance.

EDITED:

a. "We don't know how much longer we can wait before beginning it - the Downtown Revitalization plan," the mayor said.

b. "It was identified as a Canadian plane, but U.S. planes were in the area also," Maj. Gen. Larry Jones said.

c. Did the Dawson Creek Peace River Block News win the photography award?

d. Bob Rock was inducted into the Canadian Music Hall of Fame in 2007; he was also nominated for a Juno that year.

e. The inmate said to the parole board, "Jones should not be released from prison. He is a dangerous man. He has told me several times, 'I will kill again if I get a chance.'"

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